introduction

destroying homes where people live and damaging the enviorment would cause some real big problems. slums are homes that some people have and is damaging families and destroying work for people. giving alot of polution and its hard to resist it. giving families deseases and they could get real injured this has to be change so everything could be better. therefore this is gonna be change by helping the enviorment and giving more opportunitys for people.

outline:

I.

A. living in a place where theres no good conditions and its just a horrible place.

b. slums are homes that some people in the world have they are discusting,unorganized and bad conditions.

c. slums would destroy like a part of persons life. people will get deseaces and they could probaly die.

d. therefore slums could harm people but this could be improve with a little help.

II.

a.slums have a discusting look and smell and its harsh.

b.slums have destroyed alot of houses and killed children.

c.slums would also destroyed peoples lifes and its real horrible.

d.in addition this could be better but you have to help.

III.

a.this could make poverty which is a bad thing for the enviorment.

b.poverty has been made only because of slums and this should be stop.

c.slums have very bad conditions that are destroying the enviorment.

d.another reason to cancel its that is decreses work level.

IV.
a. the people that live in the slums could loose there jobs by the conditions that it has.

b.cant work because of the conditions that it has this should be fixed.

c.slums have one of the worst working place and this should be fixed.

d. could be a better place if they cancel the slums just got to help.

V.
a. this is a bad place if you are not use to this because of whatever reason.

b.living in aplace like this is no good place for childrenn and you r entire family.

c.people cant work well if of the enviorment of the slums is bad.

d.the world would be a better place if they cancel the slums.

thesis statement.

slums are places where people struggle to live. slums cause deseises for people and people die because of this. its hard for people to live because of the broken houses that their is. slums is also a discusting place for people to live in. this proves that its not a good enviorment.